(1) An incredible hot-air balloon exhibition happened on September 5, 1862. (2) It was given by Glaisher and Coxwell, two Englishmen. (3) There was no compressed oxygen for them to breathe in those days. (4) They got so high that they couldn’t use their limbs. (5) Coxwell had to open the descending valve with his teeth. (6) Before Glaisher passed out, he recorded an elevation of twenty-nine thousand feet. (7) Many believe they got eight thousand feet higher before they began to descend, making their ascent the highest in the nineteenth century.
(8) Now the largest balloon to go up in the nineteenth century was "The Giant." (9) The balloon held 215,000 cubic feet of air and was 74 feet wide. (10) It could carry four and a half tons of cargo. (11) Its flight began in Paris, in 1853, with fifteen passengers. (12) All of whom returned safely. (13) The successful trip received a great deal of national and international press because many thought the hot-air balloon would become a form of common transportation.
Which of the following is the best way to revise sentences 11 and 12?
Its flight began in Paris, in 1853, with fifteen passengers. All of whom returned safely.
A. Replace "whom" with "who."
B. Make the second sentence read "Who all returned safely."
C. Delete "of"
D. Replace the period at the end of sentence 11 with a comma.
E. Delete the period at the end of sentence 11 and change "returned" to "returning
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